the chart shows the percentage of males and females who were overweight in Australia from 1980 and 2010

the chart shows the percentage of males and females who were overweight in Australia from 1980 and 2010
The diagram below illustrates the per cent of overweight Australians either men or women from 1980 to 2010.
Overall
, the chart indicates that the majority of overweight crowds were males in both 4 years mentioned,
besides
that, the smallest gap between these genders was in 1990,
conversely
, the biggest gap was a year later.
Firstly
, in 1980, about 40% of men couldn't control their weight to be normal
while
another 30% of women couldn't as well,
additionally
, in 1990, the number increased, almost half of males and females were out of balance.
Secondly
, other 2 sessions left, it is shown that most individuals in Australia were not able to keep their weight on standard, at the beginning of the 20s, 65% of men and over 50% of women were too heavy,
nevertheless
, in 2010, the amount of males seemed to decrease but females' one were still the same as the previous one.
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