the chart below shows the changes that took place in 3 different areas of crime in Newport city centre from 2003 - 2012 summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

the chart below shows the changes that took place in 3 different areas of crime in Newport city centre from 2003 - 2012 summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart depicts changes in
crime
rates in Newport city centre from 2003 to 2012, focusing on
burglary
,
car
theft
, and
robbery
.
Crime
incidents
are measured by the number of occurrences per category.
Overall
, both
burglary
and
car
theft
experienced a declining trend over the given period, with
burglary
showing a more pronounced decrease compared to
car
theft
.
Conversely
, the incidence of
robbery
remained relatively stable with minimal fluctuations.
Initially
,
burglary
consistently ranked as the predominant
crime
, peaking at over 3500
incidents
in the first four years, marking it as the most prevalent
crime
during the decade.
Subsequently
, the number of
burglary
incidents
declined significantly, reaching a low of around 1250 in 2008, and
then
plateauing between 1250 and 1500 for the remaining years.
Similarly
,
car
theft
decreased from approximately 2750
incidents
in 2003 to just under 2500
incidents
in 2012, with minor fluctuations.
In contrast
,
robbery
exhibited a distinct pattern from the other two categories. Starting at slightly over 500
incidents
in 2003,
robbery
incidents
remained relatively constant, fluctuating between 500 and 1000, until returning to approximately the same level as in 2003 by the end of the period.
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