The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000.
The given figure depicts the manufacturing
levels
of the primary types of fuel in UK
from the years 1981 to 2000 .
Correct article usage
the UK
Overall
, it has been observed that petroleum is manufactured more from the inital
year onwards when Correct your spelling
initial
as
at the start of the year coal is produced more than Correct word choice
apply
the
natural Correct article usage
apply
gas
but years later natural gas
has surpassed the manufacturing levels
of coal .
Initially
, UK
produced 90 million tonnes of petroleum in the year 1981 and the Correct article usage
the UK
levels
has raised
continuously till 1984 and became stable till 1987 and saw Wrong verb form
rose
decline
in Add an article
a decline
further
years but from 1991 it has
a slight increase and rose dramatically and never Wrong verb form
had
seen
a decline .
Wrong verb form
saw
On the other hand
, coal was manufactured 80
million tonnes in 1981 and natural Change preposition
at 80
gas
is
produced Unnecessary verb
apply
only
around 40 million tonnes but production Change preposition
at only
levels
of coal has
declined rapidly in Correct subject-verb agreement
have
such
a way that the levels
of coal and natural gas
are
equal Wrong verb form
were
at
1984 . From Change preposition
in
then
onwards natural gas
is produced more than coalSubmitted by hv10064 on
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