The line graph and pie chart below show information on crime in the UK for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The line graph illustrates the statistics regarding

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the relationship

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between

age

and

crime

,

while

the pie charts depict the information on types of

crime

committed in the UK in the

last

year.

Overall

it can be seen that

crime

in Britain significantly

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people

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12-28. Meanwhile, violent

crime

accounted for the largest proportion among

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the four

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categories.

To begin

with, people in the UK committed no

crime

until the

age

of 8. It showed a minimal increase to nearly 50,000 in the

age

of 12. After that, the number rose dramatically, reaching its peak at 800,000 cases at the

age

of 20.

Nevertheless

, it witnessed a sharp decline to about 200,000

,

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and

then

decreased gradually to finish at about 80,000 cases at the

age

of 60. Regarding the pie chart, approximately 50% of

crime

committed in Britain was violent

crime

,

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the fraction of type of

crime

that followed by. Property and drug crimes both made up just under a quarter.

However

, the smallest fraction of the

crime

is public order

crime

, consisting

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one in ten.