The line graph and pie chart below show information on crime in the UK for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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the pie charts depict the information on types of

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committed in the UK in the

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year.

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it can be seen that

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in Britain significantly

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12-28. Meanwhile, violent

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accounted for the largest proportion among

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categories.

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with, people in the UK committed no

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until the

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of 8. It showed a minimal increase to nearly 50,000 in the

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of 12. After that, the number rose dramatically, reaching its peak at 800,000 cases at the

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of 20.

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, it witnessed a sharp decline to about 200,000

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decreased gradually to finish at about 80,000 cases at the

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of 60. Regarding the pie chart, approximately 50% of

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committed in Britain was violent

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the fraction of type of

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that followed by. Property and drug crimes both made up just under a quarter.

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, the smallest fraction of the

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is public order

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, consisting

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one in ten.