Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals aroud the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe that actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both views and present an opinion.

In the contemporary era,

environment

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pollution

is a serious problem caused by human

being

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beings

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. It is widely believed that

this

phenomenon occurs constantly and never changes

while

,

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there is another opinion

insting

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insisting

that it can be changed with appropriate behaviours of the governments and individuals.

This

essay will discuss both perspectives and present an opinion. On the one hand,

the

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pollution

will persist because the number of humanity is increasing. Advancement of science influenced the development of

agricultrual

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agricultural

technology and

making

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it possible to obtain lots of wheat and rice compared to before.

This

cosmopolitan increasing production of crops naturally leads to the worldwide population explosion.

Consequently

, it means that the possibility of

damaging

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to the Earth

increase

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and

negative

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effects

to

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natural

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environment

will never stop.

On the other hand

, the

pollution

could be solved with the efforts of the authorities and individuals. The former should invest revenues to develop the

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and alternative energy

such

as wind power and solar panels to prevent air

pollution

.

In addition

, the latter is supposed to try riding public

transportations

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transportation

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such

as

bus

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to reduce carbon dioxide

emmision

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emission

emissions

and use

reusable

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a reusable

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water

bottle

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bottles

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to decrease

amount

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the amount

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of garbage from each

households

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. In conclusion, whilst

dramatic

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increase

of

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in

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human

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humans

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have

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negative impacts

to

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on

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environment

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the environment

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, it could be addressed by the governments and people. It

it

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is

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agreed that commitment to deal with environmental issues can make the Earth more clean.

Therefore

, people should dedicate

to

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environment

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environmental

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protection.