The two bar charts below show the proportion of 14- to 16- year-old students studying a foreign language in an English speaking country, and the top three foreign languages.
The given bar charts illustrate the amount of students who learning a foreign language and the majority of languages from 1984 to 2007.
Overall
, it can be observed that the first bar chart shows most of the girls from 14 to 16 years old study languages more than the boys. Other charts, Linking Words
it
Correct pronoun usage
apply
depicts
the wide range of languages that students spend much time studying.
Regarding the first chart, which showed a decrease in the number of students. Correct subject-verb agreement
depict
Change preposition
The
About
Change preposition
The
the
Correct article usage
apply
girl
, it dropped gradually between nearly 48% and 40% from 1984 to 2007. Meanwhile, the percentage of boys decreased sharply from 30% to approximately 25% Fix the agreement mistake
girls
at the
Linking Words
end
of the period.
Take a look at the other graphs, which France Use synonyms
was seeing
the most at the beginning with 50% Wrong verb form
saw
then
dropped dramatically between 1984 and Linking Words
Linking Words
at
the Change preposition
apply
end
of the timeframe, Use synonyms
reached
nearly 22%. About Germany, it decreased gradually from 20% to 12% by the Wrong verb form
reaching
end
of the period. Use synonyms
Likewise
, Spanish saw an increase and reached approximately 10% Linking Words
at the
Linking Words
end
.Use synonyms
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