The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table provides information about several ways that
UK
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the UK
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unemployment
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unemployed
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spent their
time
last
year.
Overall
, it is evident that housework, shopping and job hunting were the most popular activities
in
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for
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both men and women.
By contrast
, they spend less
time
drinking and doing nothing. In regard to men who activated in the morning, they spent 22% of their
time
seeking
for
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a job.
Similarly
, the figures
of
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housework and shopping were 19% and 20% for each,
meanwhile
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meanwhile,
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the other categories' data were 14% and lower.
Furthermore
, morning women spent nearly half of the day doing house chores and about
about
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6 hours a day going shopping.
However
, the other groups ranged from 1% to 16%. In terms of afternoon men, watching TV accounts for 14% of their
time
,
while
the data
of
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staying in bed is
merel
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merely
1%.
Moreover
, others varied from 3% to 13%. It can be seen that
one fifth
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of afternoon women's
time
was spent
for
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on
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housework and they did not stay in bed and played
sport
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sports
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at all. On the one hand, other activities changed from 2% to 17%.
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