The chart shows the proportion of people in a UK survey carried out in the three different years

The chart shows the proportion of people in a UK survey carried out in the three different years
The bar chart gives information about the percentages of UK residents regarding their
sports
preferences in three different years (1995, 2000, 2005).
Overall
, waking was the most popular
sports
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while
golf was the least popular among participants in
this
survey. Most people in the UK
chose
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walking as their
favorite
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sport. The
proportion
increased slightly from time to time from 42% in 1995 to 44% in 2000. The percentage of
this
sport reached a peak at 45% in 2005, the highest
proportion
of all time compared to other
sports
. In the initial year, 1995,
this
proportion
was followed by rugby (28%), swimming (28%), and snooker (23%).
In contrast
to the other
sports
preferences, golf was
least
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popular among people in the UK. The surveys showed that in 1995, the percentage of
this
sport was 18%.
This
proportion
then
experienced
decrease
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to 15% in 2000 before a
slightly
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increase
at
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17% in 2005.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sports, proportion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.

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