The chart shows the proportion of people in a UK survey carried out in the three different years

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The bar chart gives information about the percentages of UK residents regarding their

sports

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preferences in three different years (1995, 2000, 2005).

Overall

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, waking was the most popular

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sports

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sport

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while

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golf was the least popular among participants in

this

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survey. Most people in the UK

chose

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choose

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walking as their

favorite

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favourite

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sport. The

proportion

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increased slightly from time to time from 42% in 1995 to 44% in 2000. The percentage of

this

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sport reached a peak at 45% in 2005, the highest

proportion

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of all time compared to other

sports

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. In the initial year, 1995,

this

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proportion

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was followed by rugby (28%), swimming (28%), and snooker (23%).

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to the other

sports

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preferences, golf was

least

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the least

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popular among people in the UK. The surveys showed that in 1995, the percentage of

this

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sport was 18%.

This

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proportion

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then

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experienced

decrease

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a decrease

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to 15% in 2000 before a

slightly

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slight

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increase

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17% in 2005.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words sports, proportion with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 4 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

152 words

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