The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart depicts how the
illiteracy
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rates
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varied
according to
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the region and gender
last
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year.
Overall
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, what stands out from the bar chart is that the developed countries showed the least
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rates
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in both male and female gender
while
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South
Asia
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resulted as the region with most of the people who can't read or write. Looking into the details, the
illiteracy
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rate of males varies from 1% to 35% resulting in the least from developed countries and the highest rate from South
Asia
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. In Sub-Saharan Africa, Arab States and South Africa illiterateness has varied from just 6% as there were only male individuals with the inability to read or write. In terms of the
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rates
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of female individuals, the highest and the lowest
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resulted in as same as male commodities.
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, there is nearly half of a difference between the
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of males and females in East
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, Sub-Saharan Africa, Arab States and South
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. In these regions, the functional
illiteracy
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dropped down nearly half in male individuals which resulting a higher rate of educated females.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words illiteracy, rates, asia with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Illiteracy rates
  • Region
  • Gender disparity
  • Bar chart
  • Estimated
  • Summarise
  • Main features
  • Comparisons
  • Analyzing
  • Discrepancies
  • Significant
  • Pronounced
  • Speculation
  • Male
  • Female
  • Global perspective
  • Literacy
  • Educational attainment
  • Socio-economic factors
  • Cultural influences
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