The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart depicts how the
illiteracy
Use synonyms
rates
varied Use synonyms
according to
the region and gender Linking Words
last
year. Linking Words
Overall
, what stands out from the bar chart is that the developed countries showed the least Linking Words
illiteracy
Use synonyms
rates
in both male and female gender Use synonyms
while
South Linking Words
Asia
resulted as the region with most of the people who can't read or write.
Looking into the details, the Use synonyms
illiteracy
rate of males varies from 1% to 35% resulting in the least from developed countries and the highest rate from South Use synonyms
Asia
. In Sub-Saharan Africa, Arab States and South Africa illiterateness has varied from just 6% as there were only male individuals with the inability to read or write.
In terms of the Use synonyms
illiteracy
Use synonyms
rates
of female individuals, the highest and the lowest Use synonyms
rates
resulted in as same as male commodities.
Use synonyms
In addition
, there is nearly half of a difference between the Linking Words
rates
of males and females in East Use synonyms
Asia
, Sub-Saharan Africa, Arab States and South Use synonyms
Asia
. In these regions, the functional Use synonyms
illiteracy
dropped down nearly half in male individuals which resulting a higher rate of educated females.Use synonyms
Submitted by amadisilva2 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
▼
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
▼
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words illiteracy, rates, asia with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
▼
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
▼