The bar chart below shows the average duration of housework women did (unemployed, part-time employed and full-time) when compared to men who had full-time work in the UK between 1985 and 2005.
The comparison data between men and women on hours spent on Hoursework in Great Britain is provided by the bar chart, over a 21-year period from 1985 to 2005.
Overall
, it is apparently seen that there was no change in hours spent in Hourswork for unemployed women during the whole period, in contrast
to who
work whether part-time or full-time. Correct pronoun usage
those who
In addition
, there was an upward trend in men with full-time employment.Submitted by dussip.rustem on
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