The bar charts below show the percentages of men and women in employment in three countries in 2005 and 2015.
The two bar charts given
provides
the proportion of males and females in the workforce in Correct subject-verb agreement
provide
Canada
, South Korea
and Sweden
in the year
2005 and 2015.
Fix the agreement mistake
years
Overall
, over the given decades the amount
of working men Change the quantifier
number
was
consistently superior to Change the verb form
were
women
. However
, in
respect to growth, all three countries saw an increment in female workers, Change preposition
with
while
the quantity of men varied over the 10-years
period.
Regarding men, in 2005, Fix the agreement mistake
10-year
Sweden
employed the highest number with a figure of approximately 79%. South Korea
came in a close second accounting for about three-quarters recruited Man. Followed by Canada
which stood at just above 60%. However
, these values all witnessed changes by 2015, with South Korea
amounting to the most rated with a little below 80%, and Canada
increased to exactly 70%. Notably, Sweden
reduced by 10% having the same rate of male workers as Canada
.
Woman, on the other hand
, experienced a rise in their employment rate by
2015. Change preposition
in
Initially
in 2005, holding the same rankied
position as me, Correct your spelling
ranking
ranked
Sweden
outnumbered all other countries by hiring nearly 45% women
, then
Canada
had just under 45%, and the country with the least amount of women
in the workforce was South Korea
comprising 30% employers. But by 2015, Sweden
and Canada
held opposite positions with percentages of 50% and roughly 54% respectively. South Korea
was still the lowest at recruiting women
constituting an estimate of about a third.Submitted by adebimpeanimawun on
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