The graph below gives information about the number of Jobs in four sectors of the economy in the US between 1960 and 2020.
The bar chart gives information on three economic
activities
in percentage, Agriculture, Manufacturing and Services compared in different areas in the world.
In general, Manufacturing accounts for the largest proportion in most of the areas except in Africa. Use synonyms
Therefore
, if we look at the figure for the whole world, Manufacturing is the major economic activity, at 45%, outnumbering Agriculture and Services which cover identical percentages, to be more precise, 30% and 25% respectively.
Looking into the details of each activity. Manufacturing is by far the greatest proportion in Asia, at 70%, followed by the number in Europe, at 50%. Africa conducted the least Manufacturing Linking Words
activities
which Use synonyms
covers
30%, Change the verb form
cover
however
, Agriculture Linking Words
activities
doubled the number and Use synonyms
this
percentage exceeds that of the other areas. The highest Service percentage appears in North America, at just over 40% followed by Europe, Linking Words
Soth
America, and Africa decreasing by about 10% each. Asia had the least Correct your spelling
South
activities
in Services Use synonyms
accounted
for less than 10%.Wrong verb form
accounting
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