The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The following graph illustrates
illiteracy
rates
according to
gender in selected nations from previous
year.
Add an article
the previous
Overall
, the highest illiteracy
rates
was
experienced by South Asia countries Change the verb form
were
while
the lowest was in developed countries. Moreover
, female's illiteracy
rates
exceeded male's in every region presented.
In detail, a huge gap of
Change preposition
in
illiteracy
rates
occurred in South Asia in which the percentage of women who could not read was approximately 60%, meanwhile
the Add a comma
meanwhile,
male's
was only 35%. The same situation Change noun form
males
also
occurred in three different regions, which were East Asia, Sub-Saharan Africa and Arab States. The female dominated
the Add a hyphen
female-dominated
illiteracy
rates
with a big difference, more or less than 20%.
On the other hand
, two
regions used to have more Correct article usage
the two
balance
Replace the word
balanced
illiteracy
rates
, which were very similar between men and women. For example
, Correct article usage
the female's
female's
Change noun form
female
illiteracy
rate in Latin America was about 11% and male's
was only 10%. Correct article usage
the male's
In addition
, the
people who lived in developed countries almost 100% could read, both male and female.Correct article usage
apply
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