The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The following graph illustrates
illiteracy
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rates
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according to
gender in selected nations from Linking Words
previous
year.
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the previous
Overall
, the highest Linking Words
illiteracy
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rates
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was
experienced by South Asia countries Change the verb form
were
while
the lowest was in developed countries. Linking Words
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, female's Linking Words
illiteracy
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rates
exceeded male's in every region presented.
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of
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in
illiteracy
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rates
occurred in South Asia in which the percentage of women who could not read was approximately 60%, Use synonyms
meanwhile
the Add a comma
meanwhile,
male's
was only 35%. The same situation Change noun form
males
also
occurred in three different regions, which were East Asia, Sub-Saharan Africa and Arab States. The Linking Words
female dominated
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female-dominated
illiteracy
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rates
with a big difference, more or less than 20%.
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On the other hand
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two
regions used to have more Correct article usage
the two
balance
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balanced
illiteracy
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rates
, which were very similar between men and women. Use synonyms
For example
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the female's
female's
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female
illiteracy
rate in Latin America was about 11% and Use synonyms
male's
was only 10%. Correct article usage
the male's
In addition
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the
people who lived in developed countries almost 100% could read, both male and female.Correct article usage
apply
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Vocabulary: Replace the words illiteracy, rates with synonyms.
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