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The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.
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The illustration gives information about
they
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the
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 way that plastic
bottles
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 are recycled.
Overall
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, we can see that the following process is cyclical, and consists of 7 steps. Starting with
collection
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the collection
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 of plastic
bottles
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 and ending with the ready products that were made from those collected
bottles
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.
Also
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, it is worth mentioning that the majority of steps are taking place in the recycling centre.
At
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In
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 the first
step
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step,
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 the
bottles
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 are collected by people, and afterwards, the truck takes all the collected
bottles
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 to
recycling
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the recycling
a recycling
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 centre. During the first step in the
centre
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centre,
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 the
bottles
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 are sorted out by people, and
then
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 they are compressed into blocks. At the next
step
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step,
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 those blocks of
bottles
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 are crushed through a machine, and those crushed plastics are collected in a container, where they are washed, with a substance.
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 plastic pellets are made by a machine, and in order to make raw materials those pellets are heated. Afterwards, those raw materials are piled up, and from
them
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them,
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 different kinds of staff are produced.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words bottles with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • recycling
  • mitigate
  • environmental impact
  • landfills
  • conservation
  • sorted
  • residual waste
  • adhesives
  • shredded
  • pellets
  • manufacturing
  • ecological
  • economical
  • sustainable
  • automation
  • raw material
  • life cycle
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