The best way to solve the world’s environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that to escalate environmental troubles is to optimize the

cost

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fuel

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agree

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that the solution to environmental troubles is to increase the

cost

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fuel

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, increasing the

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fuel

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discourage

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people

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use

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personal

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car

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secondly

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it motivates

industrial

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to change to renewable

energy

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increasing the

cost

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fuel

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make

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people

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prefer not to

use

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their own

car

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, it makes

people

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tend to

use

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public transportation.

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, if someone

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use

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their personal

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to

supermarket

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it will

cost

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more than if they

use

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public transportation. If just 50

people

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the air will only be polluted by one bus

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of 50 cars.

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, optimizing the

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fuel

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tend

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to make industrial doers

to

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replace their source of

energy

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because it is cheaper.

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businessman

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or industrial doers always want to get the biggest profit with the lowest operational

cost

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, so if the government make the

fuel

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cost

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higher and the renewable

energy

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cost

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lower, they will change to lowest

cost

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energy

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but still

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the price

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higher

cost

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fuel

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, with the

use

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of renewable

energy

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, it means less

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polution

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pollution

or even no

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polution

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pollution

solution

at all.

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cost

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fuel

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and

lower

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the renewable

energy

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cost

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can solve the world's environmental troubles

,

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because it makes

people

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tend to

use

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public transportation

instead

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of their personal

car

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and makes industrial doers change to renewable

energy

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that

cause

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less

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polution

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pollution

or even no

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polution

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pollution

solution

.