The best way to solve the world’s environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that to escalate environmental troubles is to optimize the

cost

of

the

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apply

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fuel

.

This

essay

agree

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agrees

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that the solution to environmental troubles is to increase the

cost

of

the

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apply

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fuel

.

Firstly

, increasing the

cost

of

fuel

discourage

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discourages

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people

use

personal

car

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cars

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;

secondly

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secondly,

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it motivates

industrial

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industries

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to change to renewable

energy

.

First,

increasing the

cost

of

fuel

make

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makes

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people

prefer not to

use

their own

car

, it makes

people

tend to

use

public transportation.

For instance

, if someone

use

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uses

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their personal

car

to

supermarket

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the supermarket

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it will

cost

more than if they

use

public transportation. If just 50

people

think like

this

,

then

the air will only be polluted by one bus

instead

of 50 cars.

Secondly

, optimizing the

cost

of

fuel

tend

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tends

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to make industrial doers

to

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apply

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replace their source of

energy

because it is cheaper.

For example

,

businessman

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businessmen

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or industrial doers always want to get the biggest profit with the lowest operational

cost

, so if the government make the

fuel

cost

higher and the renewable

energy

cost

lower, they will change to lowest

cost

energy

but still

increasing

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increase

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the price

due to

higher

cost

of

fuel

, with the

use

of renewable

energy

, it means less

polution

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pollution

or even no

polution

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pollution

solution

at all.

To conclude

, optimizing the

cost

of

fuel

and

lower

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lowering

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the renewable

energy

cost

can solve the world's environmental troubles

,

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apply

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because it makes

people

tend to

use

public transportation

instead

of their personal

car

and makes industrial doers change to renewable

energy

that

cause

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causes

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less

polution

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pollution

or even no

polution

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pollution

solution

.