The given two graphs provide data on the number of participants in the Olympics from 1924 to 2012, divided by gender and the total number of people.

The given two graphs provide data on the number of participants in the Olympics from 1924 to 2012, divided by gender and the total number of people.
The line graph and bar charts illustrate the
number
of men and women
athletes
who participated in the Olympic games between 1924 and 2012.
Overall
, it can be seen that over the
last
88 years ago not only the
number
of competitors was increased but
also
male
athletes
were the dominant
group
in comparison to sportswomen. First of all, in 1924 the
number
of people who participated in the Olympics was about 3000 where sportsmen had a 99% share of
this
number
and female
athletes
had the lowest
number
of
participants
. Over the next 60 years, the
number
of Olympic competitors increased gradually and reached more than double, about 7000
participants
, in total. From 1984 to 2012, the
number
of
athletes
experienced a dramatic rise where it saw six in ten per cent growth in the
number
of
participants
and reached its peak. Second of all, over
this
period the
number
of men Olympic
athletes
dominated over the female
group
and
this
amount increased gradually from 3000 to 6000
participants
which doubled in total.
In contrast
, females had the lowest
number
from 1924 to 1984 in comparison to the male
group
.
However
, between 1984 and 2012
this
rate experienced a 3000 skyrocket in growth where it stood with only 1500 sportswomen less than the male
group
in 2012.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, athletes, group, participants with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.

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