The given two graphs provide data on the number of participants in the Olympics from 1924 to 2012, divided by gender and the total number of people.
The line graph and bar charts illustrate the
number
of men and women athletes
who participated in the Olympic games between 1924 and 2012.
Overall
, it can be seen that over the last
88 years ago not only the number
of competitors was increased but also
male athletes
were the dominant group
in comparison to sportswomen.
First of all, in 1924 the number
of people who participated in the Olympics was about 3000 where sportsmen had a 99% share of this
number
and female athletes
had the lowest number
of participants
. Over the next 60 years, the number
of Olympic competitors increased gradually and reached more than double, about 7000 participants
, in total. From 1984 to 2012, the number
of athletes
experienced a dramatic rise where it saw six in ten per cent growth in the number
of participants
and reached its peak.
Second of all, over this
period the number
of men Olympic athletes
dominated over the female group
and this
amount increased gradually from 3000 to 6000 participants
which doubled in total. In contrast
, females had the lowest number
from 1924 to 1984 in comparison to the male group
. However
, between 1984 and 2012 this
rate experienced a 3000 skyrocket in growth where it stood with only 1500 sportswomen less than the male group
in 2012.Submitted by ramtin.n1374 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, athletes, group, participants with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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