The graph below shows the average consumption of cheese per person in England, Scotland, Wales and Northern Ireland between 1980 and 2020.

The graph below shows the average consumption of cheese per person in England, Scotland, Wales and Northern Ireland between 1980 and 2020.
The line graph illustrates changes in the average
consumption
of
cheese
per person in four countries (
England
, Scotland, Wales, and Northern Ireland) over 40 years (from 1980 to 2020). Units are measured in
kilograms
.
Overall
, it is obvious that the
consumption
of
cheese
in
England
and Scotland increased from 1980 to 2020,
while
for Wales and Northern Ireland, it decreased.
Additionally
,
England
was the leader in terms of
cheese
consumption
over the given period. Regarding the graph, the average
consumption
of
cheese
in
England
in 1980 was above 100
kilograms
after which figures slowly declined to over a third quarters in 2020.
Likewise
, the amount of
cheese
consumed in Scotland was more than 75
kilograms
in 1980, and after reaching a peak of just above 100
kilograms
, sequentially decreased to about 50
kilograms
in 2020.
In contrast
, there was a gradual growth in
cheese
consumption
in Wales from approximately 50 to around 75
kilograms
during the given period.
Similarly
, the average
consumption
of
cheese
in Northern Ireland was nearly 15
kilograms
in 1980, and figures
then
rose progressively to over 50
kilograms
at the end
of the period given.
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