The graph below shows the average consumption of cheese per person in England, Scotland, Wales and Northern Ireland between 1980 and 2020.

The graph below shows the average consumption of cheese per person in England, Scotland, Wales and Northern Ireland between 1980 and 2020.
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The line graph illustrates changes in the average
consumption
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of
cheese
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per person in four countries (
England
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, Scotland, Wales, and Northern Ireland) over 40 years (from 1980 to 2020). Units are measured in
kilograms
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.
Overall
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, it is obvious that the
consumption
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of
cheese
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in
England
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and Scotland increased from 1980 to 2020,
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for Wales and Northern Ireland, it decreased.
Additionally
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,
England
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was the leader in terms of
cheese
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consumption
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over the given period. Regarding the graph, the average
consumption
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of
cheese
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in
England
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in 1980 was above 100
kilograms
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after which figures slowly declined to over a third quarters in 2020.
Likewise
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, the amount of
cheese
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consumed in Scotland was more than 75
kilograms
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in 1980, and after reaching a peak of just above 100
kilograms
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, sequentially decreased to about 50
kilograms
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in 2020.
In contrast
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, there was a gradual growth in
cheese
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consumption
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in Wales from approximately 50 to around 75
kilograms
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during the given period.
Similarly
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, the average
consumption
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of
cheese
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in Northern Ireland was nearly 15
kilograms
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in 1980, and figures
then
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rose progressively to over 50
kilograms
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at the end
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of the period given.
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