The graph below shows the average consumption of cheese per person in England, Scotland, Wales and Northern Ireland between 1980 and 2020.
The bar chart depicts rates of
britishs’
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britishs
education
which is divided into Use synonyms
male
and Fix the agreement mistake
males
female
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females
were
they Correct your spelling
where
studying as
full-time or part-time in three different decades.
Wrong verb form
study
Overall
,all of Linking Words
trends
were increasing during these decades except Add an article
the trends
number
of men who Change the article
a number
the number
educate
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were educated
as
part-time which Change preposition
apply
was
fluctuated.
It can be seen that the part-time Unnecessary verb
apply
education
in women started Use synonyms
around
700 Change preposition
at around
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thousands
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thousand
at
1970 and grew up to 800 Change preposition
in
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thousands
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thousand
at
1980 Change preposition
in
then
it rose dramatically to Linking Words
highest
point Correct pronoun usage
its highest
around
1100 Change preposition
of around
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thousands
.In 1970, the start point of full-time Change to singular
thousand
education
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in
Change preposition
for
female
was the Fix the agreement mistake
females
least
value which was around 50 Correct word choice
lowest
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thousands
, Change to singular
thousand
then
it went up rapidly to Linking Words
reached
200 Wrong verb form
reach
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thousands
.But in the Change to singular
thousand
last
Linking Words
year
it did not increase a lot.
The Add a comma
year,
statistic
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statistics
of
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for
part-time
Correct article usage
the part-time
education
of men Use synonyms
was
fluctuated which Unnecessary verb
apply
was
began Unnecessary verb
apply
with
1000 Change preposition
at
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thousands
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thousand
then
decreased suddenly and went up slightly Linking Words
that
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apply
reached
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reaching
to
900 Change preposition
apply
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thousands
,whilst the trend of full-time Change to singular
thousand
education
increased steadily which was Use synonyms
started
from 100 Wrong verb form
starting
Use synonyms
thousands
to just over 200 Change to singular
thousand
Use synonyms
thousands
.Change to singular
thousand
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Vocabulary: Replace the words education, thousands with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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