The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of rice in 2020
This
figure compares the making and using tonnes
of rice
in ten different countries in 2020.
Overall
, both Hungary and the Philippines are in the high values, whereas
South Korea have the least amount of rice
in production and consumption within existed
countries.
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is
the highest rate Verb problem
has
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of
rice
with 540 tonnes
and 532 tonnes
respectively. The Philippines is in the highest-second level with 410 tonnes
and 387 tonnes
of making and using rice
respectively. However
, South Korea has the least
proportion of production and consumption with 49 Correct word choice
lowest
tonnes
and 45 tonnes
respectively.
There are some countries in bar
chart that have the same value in producing or consuming. Both Vietnam and Zambia have 46 Correct article usage
the bar
tonnes
of consuming
in Replace the word
consumption
this
report. Meanwhile, Zambia and Bangladesh are similar in 53 tonnes
of rice
production.Submitted by brightstargalaxy on
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