The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table and pie charts illustrate the revenues and expenditures of
the
Great Britain’s police force in Correct article usage
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two
years period. The table provides data on their incomes, and the two
pie charts show the sectors which
the money Change preposition
in which
spend
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is spent
on
.
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Overall
, it is evident that the highest amount of their budget was allocated by government
, and around Add an article
the government
one-forth
of it Correct your spelling
one-fourth
spent
on staff’s wages.
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was spent
According to
the table, the police annual budget saw a small rise in 2018 compare
to 2017, the total income was 318.6 m and 304.7m, respectively. The money which was injected by Wrong verb form
compared
national
government in the Add an article
the national
a national
two
years was approximately 178 million. However
, the tax was
paid by local people was 91.2 million in 2017 and after a slight growth reached Unnecessary verb
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to
102.3 in 2018. The other revenue source Change preposition
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such
as grants and donation
gained around 38 million.
Turning to the pie charts, the highest proportion of the police budget Fix the agreement mistake
donations
spent
on officers and staff salaries, in 2017 Add a missing verb
was spent
it
was around seventy Correct pronoun usage
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percent
, Change the spelling
per cent
whereas
, the money which
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spend
on technology was eight Wrong verb form
spent
percent
. In 2018, around 14% was allocated Change the spelling
per cent
on
technology, Change preposition
to
whereas
, the employees’ salaries experienced a little decline, around 69%. The building and transport expenses was
about 17% during the Change the verb form
were
two
years.Submitted by Negar_seddigh on
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