The map below shows the changes that have taken place at the waterfront area of a town called Darwin between 2009 and 2014.

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The coastal
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known as Darwin is depicted in two maps showing significant changes between 2009 and 2014. Generally, the most notable transformation is the complete replacement of the factory district in the town's
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with green trees. Meanwhile, the facilities around the lake have mostly remained the same.
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, the industrial zone to the right of the lake was demolished to make way for a swimming pool.
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, the school and convention
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to the north stayed unchanged, as did the fishing
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over the five-year period. Moving to the
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of the shoreline, a significant change was the demolition of a portion of the manufacturing
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and the construction of residential buildings in close proximity to the old ones. The
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to the right of the residential buildings was replaced with a campus.
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, the southern
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, once an industrial field, was converted into vegetation. A new street for pedestrians was built across
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green space, connecting to the
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on the sea.
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, the two swimming pools to the west of the coast remained unchanged until 2014.
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