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The charts below show the level of participation in education and science in developing and industrialised countries in 1980 and 1990. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The charts below show the level of participation in education and science in developing and industrialised countries in 1980 and 1990. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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There are three tables which
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 been done for our investigation, where
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 diagram illustrates the data about
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 percentage of school attendance in developing and industrialised
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 during 10 years launching from 1980,
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 one provides
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 proportion of scientists and technicians per 1000 people and third shows an information about research and development sectors improvement
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 above-mentioned categories.
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, as it can be observed in accordance with all three diagrams, the percentage of public involvement in
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 sectors as education and research improvement is considerably higher in industrialised
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, more than a few times.
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, there was approximately threefold more attendance in
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industrialised
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 in comparison with developing
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, which was equal
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 2
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 of education attendance in 1980.
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, it is essential to note that citizens of developing
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 did not accelerate the research direction over 10 years
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.
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, there was an enormous climb in the development of scientific activities in industrialised
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 during 10 years, around twofold more than in 1980.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "improvement" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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