You are planning to travel and would like someone to take care of your apartment while you are away. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter •explain why you will be away •ask your friend to take care of your apartment •describe the tasks you want your friend to do Begin your letter as follows: Dear……

#travel #someone #care #apartment #friend #•explain #•ask #•describe #tasks #dear……

Dear

Emillia

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Emilia

, I hope

thisletter

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this letter

finds you in great health and you are doing well there, I am writing

this

message to inform you that I

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planning to go on vacation on Monday next week until Saturday night.

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letter

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I am going to ask you to take care of my apartment. First of all, I will go on vacation on Monday morning to Japan and

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will come back

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Saturday night I need your hand to assist me

to take

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in taking

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care

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of my

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flat during my holiday.

Moreover

, there are a lot of my

pricely

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princely

goods, I trust to you that you can maintain it well.

Furthermore

, let me explain what you must

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do there.

Firstly

, In the afternoon please turn on the lamp

in addition

I would say thank you if sometime you

willing

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to put

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it up

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overthere

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over there

Finally

, I have

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equatic

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aquatic

animal

that is

Arwana please give him food every night. I expect you will be able to make it and take care of

your self

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. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours Sincerely, Vievie.

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Coherence and Cohesion

Ensure each paragraph clearly addresses a specific point for improved clarity.

Coherence and Cohesion

Correct minor grammatical errors and adjust sentence structures for better flow.

Task Achievement

Elaborate a bit more on why you trust your friend with your apartment for a more complete response.

Task Achievement

Your letter effectively communicates your request and provides clear instructions on what needs to be done.

Task Achievement

Friendly and appropriate tone throughout the letter.

Coherence and Cohesion

Logical progression from introduction to request, then instructions, and finally a closing statement.

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8Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
16Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

185 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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