The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The table shows how
men
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and
women
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who are out of work spent their time
last
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year. The information is broken down into both morning and afternoon and shows fourteen different
activities
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. Housework, shopping and looking for work were the most common
activities
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in the morning with nearly half of
women
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doing housework in the morning and a fifth in the afternoon.
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figure was much lower for
men
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. Both
men
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and
women
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preferred to do leisure
activities
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in the afternoon. When
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looking
at the difference between sexes, it is
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interesting to note that
men
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were more than twice as likely to focus on home improvement, gardening (14% to 2%) and taking part in
sport
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and walking.
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, less productive
activities
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like visiting town, staying in bed and sitting around were similar for both
men
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and
women
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.
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,
it is clear that
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the majority of
men
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and
women
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who are not working spend their time on productive tasks
such
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as housework, trying to secure employment or shopping with a
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small proportion doing nothing, staying in bed or drinking.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words men, women, activities with synonyms.
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