The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The table shows how
men
and women
who are out of work spent their time last
year. The information is broken down into both morning and afternoon and shows fourteen different activities
.
Housework, shopping and looking for work were the most common activities
in the morning with nearly half of women
doing housework in the morning and a fifth in the afternoon. This
figure was much lower for men
. Both men
and women
preferred to do leisure activities
in the afternoon.
When loking
at the difference between sexes, it is Correct your spelling
looking
also
interesting to note that men
were more than twice as likely to focus on home improvement, gardening (14% to 2%) and taking part in sport
and walking. Fix the agreement mistake
sports
However
, less productive activities
like visiting town, staying in bed and sitting around were similar for both men
and women
.
Overall
, it is clear that
the majority of men
and women
who are not working spend their time on productive tasks such
as housework, trying to secure employment or shopping with a relative
small proportion doing nothing, staying in bed or drinking.Change the adjective
relatively
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words men, women, activities with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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