The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The table shows how
men
and Use synonyms
women
who are out of work spent their time Use synonyms
last
year. The information is broken down into both morning and afternoon and shows fourteen different Linking Words
activities
.
Housework, shopping and looking for work were the most common Use synonyms
activities
in the morning with nearly half of Use synonyms
women
doing housework in the morning and a fifth in the afternoon. Use synonyms
This
figure was much lower for Linking Words
men
. Both Use synonyms
men
and Use synonyms
women
preferred to do leisure Use synonyms
activities
in the afternoon.
When Use synonyms
loking
at the difference between sexes, it is Correct your spelling
looking
also
interesting to note that Linking Words
men
were more than twice as likely to focus on home improvement, gardening (14% to 2%) and taking part in Use synonyms
sport
and walking. Fix the agreement mistake
sports
However
, less productive Linking Words
activities
like visiting town, staying in bed and sitting around were similar for both Use synonyms
men
and Use synonyms
women
.
Use synonyms
Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
the majority of Linking Words
men
and Use synonyms
women
who are not working spend their time on productive tasks Use synonyms
such
as housework, trying to secure employment or shopping with a Linking Words
relative
small proportion doing nothing, staying in bed or drinking.Change the adjective
relatively
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words men, women, activities with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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