The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The table shows how
men
and
women
who are out of work spent their time
last
year. The information is broken down into both morning and afternoon and shows fourteen different
activities
. Housework, shopping and looking for work were the most common
activities
in the morning with nearly half of
women
doing housework in the morning and a fifth in the afternoon.
This
figure was much lower for
men
. Both
men
and
women
preferred to do leisure
activities
in the afternoon. When
loking
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looking
at the difference between sexes, it is
also
interesting to note that
men
were more than twice as likely to focus on home improvement, gardening (14% to 2%) and taking part in
sport
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sports
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and walking.
However
, less productive
activities
like visiting town, staying in bed and sitting around were similar for both
men
and
women
.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the majority of
men
and
women
who are not working spend their time on productive tasks
such
as housework, trying to secure employment or shopping with a
relative
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small proportion doing nothing, staying in bed or drinking.
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