Money offered for post graduate research is limited; as a consequence, some people argue that financial support from the government should only be provided for scientific research rather than research for less useful sub. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
It has been observed that
,
funds for postgraduate Remove the comma
apply
research
are unsufficient
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insufficient
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, other pople
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the
government
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financial aid to only Change the verb form
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science
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the government
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for
science
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other useless topics
due to
a
global warming, human error, Correct article usage
apply
unwanted
harmful diseases are Correct word choice
and unwanted
occuring
, for tackling them Correct your spelling
occurring
science
is the foremost option to handle the situation. In other words
, in the last
few decades
human civilisation and animal life have suffered through various massacre events, and we never know where the next conflict will erupt. Add a comma
decades,
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, covid -19 event, in that period, many people have
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life
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lives
job
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jobs
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and economical
economical
support. Replace the word
economic
Therefore
, to overcome such
type of destructive conditions, scientist
have to Fix the agreement mistake
scientists
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prepare
that
with multiple cures and Correct pronoun usage
them
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a thesis
Furthermore
, Technological advancement has grown utterly, and new equiepments
can improve the Correct your spelling
equipment
research
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level, Correct your spelling
accuracy
proccesing
time, Correct your spelling
processing
efforts
. Correct word choice
and efforts
In addition
, many recent gradutates
MIT and machine learning students trying to Correct your spelling
graduates
envent
some Correct your spelling
invent
importat inovation
to help Correct your spelling
important innovation
science
and environment issues, but due to
the scarcity of funds
they could not Add a comma
funds,
completed
their Change the verb form
complete
reasearch
. so Correct your spelling
research
government
can help them through Add an article
the government
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a shcollership
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a shcollership
shcollership programm
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scholarship program
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the right
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platform to experiment and direct financial Correct article usage
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support
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support
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achieve
achive
perfect results.
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achieve
on the contrary
, unnecessary subjects
field
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fields
such
as some specific art, entertenment
and various fashion Correct your spelling
entertainment
exibitions
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exhibitions
authorites
can less focus on these types of Correct your spelling
authorities
subjects
because they are lessen
imperative for Replace the word
less
human
future. Correct article usage
the human
For instance
, amusment
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amusement
subjects
, art concerts and fashion are not contrubuting
as Correct your spelling
contributing
such
valuable inputs in future betterment of world aspect. thus
, the govenment
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government
provieds
more money Correct your spelling
provide
provides
to
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for
science
innovation rather than unnecessary subjects
.
In conclusion, The government
should have support
scientist and their Replace the word
supported
innovetive
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innovative
research
devolopment
through financial aid rather than useless Correct your spelling
development
subjects
because they could not contrubute
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contribute
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