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The maps below show an industral area in the town fo Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The maps below show an industral area in the town fo Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The two maps present the industrial space, which is located in the town of Norbiton, and its plans for the future.
Overall
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, whilst the location of the township relative to the farmland and the roundabout remain the same, the type of buildings will change drastically, and alongside it the roads connecting the range.
For example
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, there will be a new road built
further
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 up across the river and a second roundabout will be constructed
further
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 south. As the industrial space currently stands, there is a noticeable roundabout situated to the East of the town.
This
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 allows for greater connectivity with parts
further
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 down south of the roundabout and with the factories located south to the farmland, and east to the roundabout. The road on the East side of the map has clusters of industry on either side, which is
also
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 true for the roundabout located in the
center
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.
Although
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 the space contains a town to the West and farmland to the North, its present state means that the is relatively sparse, with a majority prevalence of industry.
On the other hand
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, the plans for Norbiton in the future are somewhat different.
In contrast
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 to where the industrial zones are located currently, they will be replaced by an extensive construction of new housing in both the Eastern and Western parts of the industrial range.
However
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, housing isn't the only planned development. Facilities
such
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 as shops and medical
centers
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 are planned to be constructed and scattered across the field, which will mean that there will be a Playground and a School located near the newly constructed housing.
Therefore
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, it's clear that when compared with the present situation, the field is projected to contain a higher variety of buildings.
Furthermore
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, a road extension is expected to be built, extending north across the river.
In addition
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,
this
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 is expected to be accompanied by another structure of housing in the province containing the farm, allowing access to the province which previously contained no type of construction.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "further".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 3 times.
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