The two pie charts below show total world energy consumption and electricity generation for last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two pie charts below show total world energy consumption and electricity generation for last year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The charts illustrate some statistics about the sources and the usages of
electricity
from the
last
year.
Overall
, fossil fuels both consumed and generated the majority of the
electricity
,
while
green energy production predominated the consumption.
Last
year, coal generated almost 40% of the total
electricity
worldwide,
however
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consumed only a quarter of it,
while
oil contributed 6.7% and used roughly five times more, 34.3%. Gas presented approximately the same percentages, and was in balance. In terms of the other origins of
electricity
, the hydro and nuclear types illustrated one-third collectively,
while
used less than 10%. ( with 2.2% and 6.5% respectively ) Noticeable, that the combustible renewables and waste category observed similar figures from the total world energy consumption of
electricity
, accounting for
arround
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around
10%. In terms of total consumption, 0.4% was presented by other users of energy, which is five times less compared to the produced
electricity
by
this
type of source.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "illustrate" was used 2 times.
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