The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.

The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.
The given map illustrates the future supermarkets that will be
buit
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built
in Garlsdon, a town with 65.000 inhabitants.
Overall
, the first supermarket (S1) will be constructed in the countryside, and the second one (S2) will be situated in the town centre.
While
the S1 can be reached through the main road and railway, the S2 can only be visited by train. Based on the graph, S1 will be built
on
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the northwestern area, just 12 km
to
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from
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Hindon, a small town with 10.000 civilians. It is right between the main road and the railway, and its nearest zone is the industry sector.
On the other hand
, S2 will be located in the heart of the city and surrounded by
industrial
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complex.
Furthermore
, it is
also
reachable from the housing area. Meanwhile,
this
second site is near
to
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the two neighbourhood towns, Bransdon City with 15.000 population and Cransdon City with 29.000 citizens.
Therefore
,
this
place will gain popularity among the three cities.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Accessibility
  • Congestion
  • Economic benefits
  • Environmental impact
  • Foot traffic
  • Green space
  • Job creation
  • Local property values
  • Parking availability
  • Pollution
  • Proximity
  • Public transportation
  • Sustainability
  • Traffic patterns
  • Residential areas
  • Shopping convenience
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