The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.
The given map illustrates the future supermarkets that will be
buit
in Garlsdon, a town with 65.000 inhabitants.
Correct your spelling
built
Overall
, the first supermarket (S1) will be constructed in the countryside, and the second one (S2) will be situated in the town centre. While
the S1 can be reached through the main road and railway, the S2 can only be visited by train.
Based on the graph, S1 will be built on
the northwestern area, just 12 km Change preposition
in
to
Hindon, a small town with 10.000 civilians. It is right between the main road and the railway, and its nearest zone is the industry sector. Change preposition
from
On the other hand
, S2 will be located in the heart of the city and surrounded by industrial
complex. Correct article usage
an industrial
Furthermore
, it is also
reachable from the housing area. Meanwhile, this
second site is near to
the two neighbourhood towns, Bransdon City with 15.000 population and Cransdon City with 29.000 citizens. Change preposition
apply
Therefore
, this
place will gain popularity among the three cities.Submitted by mayaanita.studi on
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