In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?
It was considerably common for
students
to study in their home state when they pursued Use synonyms
for
a degree from tertiary Remove the preposition
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education
, Use synonyms
whereas
, these days, they receive more Linking Words
chance
to perform an overseas study, which is able to broaden their horizons. Fix the agreement mistake
chances
However
, Linking Words
students
tend to face Use synonyms
with
more hindrances Change preposition
apply
while
living abroad.
On the one side, having a third-level Linking Words
education
overseas results in several benefits for the Use synonyms
students
. The experiences gained from Use synonyms
this
opportunity appear to be significant for Linking Words
students
. It is because they are required to exit their comfort zone by immersing themselves Use synonyms
on
the local culture, which Change preposition
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seem
to enrich their knowledge. Change the verb form
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For instance
, people who decide to continue their Linking Words
education
in Japan are being forced to learn Use synonyms
Japanese
language and the culture of Japanese society; Correct article usage
the Japanese
thus
, they have unlocked a new language ability. Linking Words
Furthermore
, studying abroad could be a proper way to expand Linking Words
students
’ Use synonyms
connection
. Strong connection with other people usually brings benefits in the future, especially when they graduate from the university and start looking for Fix the agreement mistake
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an
employment. Remove the article
apply
Additionally
, in some cases, the employment rate of Linking Words
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an individual
the individual
individual
who graduated from foreign Fix the agreement mistake
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university
tends to be higher than local graduated Fix the agreement mistake
universities
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students
for example
, some companies in Indonesia prefer to hire Linking Words
someone’s
who Change noun form
someone
had
studied abroad.
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has
However
, the advantages come with some drawbacks, especially to the Linking Words
students
themselves. Use synonyms
To begin
with, most Linking Words
students
live with their parents from Use synonyms
the
elementary until secondary Correct article usage
apply
education
, and when they decide to study outside of their countries, they need to move out and live by themselves. Use synonyms
This
condition Linking Words
appear
to be overwhelming for some Change the verb form
appears
students
because they will surely experience Use synonyms
homesick
and stress. If Replace the word
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this
happened, they would not be able to focus on their Linking Words
education
and the worst case would be Use synonyms
failed
to satisfy the minimum grades to graduate. Wrong verb form
failing
For example
, research claims that mental Linking Words
condition
play a fundamental role in Fix the agreement mistake
conditions
students
’ Use synonyms
life
and stress is the number one factor of their failure. Fix the agreement mistake
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Secondly
, studying overseas may require a significant amount of money, ranging from tuition Linking Words
fee
to living Fix the agreement mistake
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cost
. It appears to be a burden to their family and to the Fix the agreement mistake
costs
students
themselves. In various Use synonyms
case
, many families apply for Fix the agreement mistake
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loan
to fund the university’s Fix the agreement mistake
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fee
.
In conclusion, Fix the agreement mistake
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while
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new experiences and opportunities for Correct subject-verb agreement
provides
students
, the stress and cost can be Use synonyms
a considerable drawbacks
.Correct the article-noun agreement
a considerable drawback
considerable drawbacks
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