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The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar charts provide key information about the total
ratio
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 of
movies
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 produced and the total proportion of ticket sales in two different years in a world region, with units measured in percentages.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the
ratio
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 of cinema
tickets
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 for comedy
films
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 was the highest, in 1996 and 2006 compared to the rate of other
tickets
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.
In addition
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, the production of drama
films
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 accounted for the highest
ratio
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 in the two years,
whereas
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 romance
movies
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 represented the lowest rate.
According to
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 what is shown, the dominant
ratio
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 of
films
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 released was for drama, at about a quarter, in 1996 and around one-
third,
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in 2006.
Conversely
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, the lowest percentage of produced
movies
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 was for romance
films
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, which was equivalent in 1996 and 2006, at approximately 7%. In terms of the sales of cinema
tickets
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, the biggest proportion was for comedy, at a fifth, in 1996 and, at about, 23%, in 2006. Drama
films
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 witnessed a nearly similar percentage with about 1% difference between 1996 and 2006. In 2006, the rate of
tickets
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 for fantasy
movies
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 was more than twice, in 1996.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words ratio, movies, tickets, films with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • depict
  • significant increases/decreases
  • highlighting
  • drawing comparisons
  • discrepancies
  • notable trends
  • unexpected findings
  • anomalies
  • phenomenon
  • emphasizing
  • evolution
  • implications
  • producers
  • distributors
  • audiences
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