A friend told you recently that he/she had gone to an excellent restaurant. You wonder if this restaurant will be suitable for your birthday party next week. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter 1. tell your friend about your planned party 2. ask what the restaurant is called and for directions to get there 3. ask what kind of food it serves and if your friend has any particular recommendations from the menu You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Chain,
I hope
your
are doing well. I am Change the pronoun
you
writting
Correct your spelling
writing
this
letter to gather some information about the restaurant which you have
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apply
a
few weeks ago.
As you know, my birthday falls on Change preposition
to a
26th
of Correct article usage
the 26th
this
month. I am looking for a hotel on
which I can host a party Change preposition
in
to
all of our friends. I remembered that you have told me about the newly opened Change preposition
for
restaurent
and their excellent services. I am wondering whether Correct your spelling
restaurant
this
place will be the best fit for the party.
I would be delighted if you share me
some Change preposition
with me
value
information about the hotel Replace the word
valuable
such
as the name of the place and where it is located. In some posters
it Add a comma
posters,
have
mentioned that the Change the verb form
has
restaurent
was located in Correct your spelling
restaurant
High
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the High
street
. Is that the one which is near our town Capitalize word
Street
center
?
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centre
Additionally
, I am also
looking for some information about their foods. Can you please let me know, what type of food is served at that place? I would be glad if they have
some Wrong verb form
had
indian
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Indian
cushion
on their menu. Fix the agreement mistake
cushions
Also
, you have been there previously, do you have any preference from
the menu? Change preposition
for
Along with
this
please let me know if I have to them in advance.
I am looking forward to hear
back from you. See you soon.
Yours lovingly,
Sarah.Change the verb form
hearing
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Structure
To improve your letter, try to organize your ideas more clearly. Introduce your paragraphs with a topic sentence for better structure.
Accuracy
Proofread your writing for small errors in spelling or grammar to enhance clarity and professionalism.
Detail
Consider asking more detailed questions about the restaurant, such as about the ambiance or the service, to make your inquiry more thorough.
Language fluency
Use more precise language and idiomatic expressions to make your letter sound more natural and engaging.
Task Response
You've effectively addressed all parts of the task by providing a clear introduction, asking specific questions, and concluding your letter warmly.
Structure
You have used paragraphing to separate different ideas, which makes your letter easier to follow.
Tone
Your tone is appropriately friendly and polite, fitting the context of writing to a friend.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite