The table illustrates the cost of three environmental projects for sustainable forestry in the next five years. The pie chart, on the other hand, depicts four sectors allocated in the project in the first year.
The table illustrates the amount of money used in three different countries in the next five consecutive years and the pie chart presents the proportion of the expected expenditure in
year
one.
Overall
, it is clear that
West Africa and Central America
spend money less than Southeast Asia on projects for sustainable forestry. Moreover
, In the first year
, cash is mostly spent on salaries.
To begin
with, The projected costing
in Central Replace the word
cost
America
begins at 10.5 and then
decreases to 2.5 in the third year
before levelling off in the fourth year
. However
, it rises to 3.5 in
the end of the period. West Africa will spend their cash almost less than Central Change the preposition
at
America
by half. On the contrary
, the spending of Southeast Asia costings
for Replace the word
costs
environment
seems to be higher than the total amount of money in West Africa and Central Add an article
the environment
America
. It will begin at 30 and drop to 20 in year
two, as well as
, surging to 50 and hover at this
point to the end.
Additionally
, In year
one of projected expenditure, half of the bill is used for paying salaries. Followed by set-up costs which occupy 30%. Both training and office expenses share the same fraction which is 10%.Submitted by nnatthinee on
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words year, america with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "illustrates" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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