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the pie chart below shows the online shopping sales for the retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 ans 2013.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features ,and make comparisons where relavent.

the pie chart below shows the online shopping sales for the retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 ans 2013.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features ,and make comparisons where relavent.
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The given
pie
chart
represent
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represents
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 the online
sales
 of the retail sector in the
year
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years
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 2003 and 2013.From the
pie
chart
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chart,
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 it is noticed that the online sale is mainly based on four topics. The four
topic
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topics
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 that the
pie
chart
 focuses on are,
travel
,
film
 or
music
,
books
 and
clothes
.From the
pie
chart
of
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for
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 the
year
2003
Add a comma
2003,
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 it is inferred that
travel
 took the major
sales
 with 36% which is followed by
clothes
24
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at 24
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% and
film
 and
music
 with 21%.
Books
 were sold at
the
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apply
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least 19% in the retail sector in the
year
 2003. Next,from the
pie
chart
 from the
year
2013
Add a comma
2013,
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 we could notice that
film
 and
music
 raised its
sales
 to the top by 33% and
travel
 went down second by 29%.
Moreover
,
books
 which were 19% sold in 2003
was raised
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increased
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 to 22% in 2013 and
clothes
 which were 24% in 2003
daclained
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decreased
 to 16% in 2013. From the provided
pie
 charts it can be concluded that there are
quiet
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quite
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 a few changes in the online
sales
 of
the
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books
 for retail sectors in New Zealand from the
year
 2003 to 2013.The
sales
 of
the
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books
 in both
the
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apply
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years did not show much difference
whereas
 all the other
travel
,
film
 or
music
 and
clothes
 showed a huge difference in their
sales
 towards the future.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words pie, chart, sales, year, travel, film, music, books, clothes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.
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