The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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From the
given picture,Change preposition
The
it
represents the switch in ownership of electrical Correct pronoun usage
apply
appliances
and the time spent in households
for
doing Change preposition
apply
housework
in one country between 1920 and 2019.
In 1920, the percentage of electrical appliances
Change the noun form
appliance
usage
in households
were
low.Correct subject-verb agreement
was
Firstly
the usage
of refridgerator
were
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was
initially
zero percentage, but gradually usage
of refridgerator
has been increased.Similarly
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Similarly,
usage
of vacuum
cleaner
were Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
initially
30%,but as of now
2019 Add a comma
now,
Vacuum
cleaner usage
is one of the much needed
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much-needed
appliances
.Finally
the Add a comma
Finally,
usage
of the Washing machine uin
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in
early
days Correct article usage
the early
were
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was
nearly
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near
upto
40%,but Correct your spelling
up to
in
between 1960 to 1980 Change preposition
apply
it's
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its
usage
had
declined and after it increased gradually, but not Unnecessary verb
apply
upto
the level of Correct your spelling
up to
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the refridgerator
refridgerator
or Correct your spelling
refrigerator
vacuum
cleaner
.
From the given graph, the picture illustrates the number of Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
hours
of housework
per week per household between 1920 and 2019.During 1920 the hours
of housework
per week per household were 50% and the increase in electrical appliances
such
as washing machine
,Fix the agreement mistake
machines
refridgerator
and Correct your spelling
refrigerator
vacuum
cleaner
made the work quicker and easier. Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
This
lead
to Replace the word
led
reduction
in the number of Add an article
a reduction
hours
of work in households
,almost reduced the work to 10% as of 2019 data.
Finally
,Correct article usage
the
in
more electrical Change preposition
to
appliances
in hoseholds
for doing Correct your spelling
households
housework
have
gradually reduced the number of working Correct subject-verb agreement
has
hours
in households
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