the pie chart below show the spending of a school in the UK from 1981 to 2001

the pie chart below show the spending of a school in the UK from 1981 to 2001
The pie graphs display the proportion of the budget that a UK school spent over a period of 2 decades between 1981 and 2001.
Overall
, the largest expenditure was Teachers’
salaries
through the given period.
This
also
increased in the next years in general perspective,
while
Other workers’
salaries
continued to decrease steadily year by year. In 1981, the 3 largest expenditures were Teachers’
salaries
, Other workers’
salaries
and both Resources e.g. books and Furniture and equipment, with 40%, 28% and 15% each for the equal categories, respectively.
However
, throughout the next years, the third largest spending was on Resources e.g. books by themself in 1991,
while
it was Furniture and equipment in 2001,
although
, the salary of both Teachers’
salaries
, with almost half of the proportion, and Other workers’
salaries
, which lost 6-7% each decade, stayed among the largest. The remaining category, Insurance, was under 10% each year despite its continuous rise over the period and peak
at the end
of the given data, with 2%, 3% and 8%, respectively.
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