the pie chart below show the spending of a school in the UK from 1981 to 2001

the pie chart below show the spending of a school in the UK from 1981 to 2001
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The pie graphs display the proportion of the budget that a UK school spent over a period of 2 decades between 1981 and 2001.
Overall
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, the largest expenditure was Teachers’
salaries
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through the given period.
This
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also
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increased in the next years in general perspective,
while
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Other workers’
salaries
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continued to decrease steadily year by year. In 1981, the 3 largest expenditures were Teachers’
salaries
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, Other workers’
salaries
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and both Resources e.g. books and Furniture and equipment, with 40%, 28% and 15% each for the equal categories, respectively.
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, throughout the next years, the third largest spending was on Resources e.g. books by themself in 1991,
while
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it was Furniture and equipment in 2001,
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, the salary of both Teachers’
salaries
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, with almost half of the proportion, and Other workers’
salaries
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, which lost 6-7% each decade, stayed among the largest. The remaining category, Insurance, was under 10% each year despite its continuous rise over the period and peak
at the end
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of the given data, with 2%, 3% and 8%, respectively.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words salaries with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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