your are talking a course at local college, The deadline for your project was last week but you haven't finisted it write a letter to your lectutrer in your letter Introduce your self, Eplain why yout havn't handed in the project yet, request more time to do it

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Dear Madam,
This
is Mohan K
studing
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a
B.Com final year student at KPG
college
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of Arts and Science
coimbatore
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. My roll Number is 0BAM0008, Sorry for the
inconvence
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inconvenience
, I haven't completed my final year
project
as pe the final date of submission. I
had been
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admitted
in
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hospital
due to
bike
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accident
happened
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that happened
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on
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last
week and It was
occured
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occurred
at
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gandhipuram
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Gandhipuram
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main road
siganl
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signal
becuase
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because
of
traffic
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a traffic
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siganl
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signal
problem
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problems
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.
additionally
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i
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I
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have
major
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major
injury
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injuries
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in
right
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my right
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hand and right leg furthemore
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the doctor's
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doctor's
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doctor
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adviced
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advised
advice
to
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me to
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take one month
bed
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of bed
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rest.
Also
, I request you to
extent
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the
project
submission date for my
project
and once i will be recured my
helath
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health
, I will be completed the
project
within
a
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two weeks, Again, I
rquest
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request
you to accept and approve
the
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my
requerst
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request
. Thanking you Yours truly Mohan K
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structure
Try to organize your ideas more clearly with separate paragraphs for the introduction, explanation, and request.
greeting and closing
Begin with a clear introductory sentence and consider a more formal closing line.
focus
Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea to enhance clarity and flow.
detail
Address all aspects of the task, including a more detailed request regarding the deadline extension.
tone
Consider reviewing and using more formal language appropriate for communication with an academic staff.
explanation
You have provided a clear reason for the delay in submission.
politeness
The request for an extension is politely made, showing respect towards the recipient.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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