Task 1: The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Task 1: The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000.

Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given line graph illustrates the
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of manufacturing of petroleum, natural gas and coal in the UK from 1981 to 2000.
Overall
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, all the
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of the main typical fuels recorded an upward trend in the entire period, except for coal which observed a contrasting trend. The figure for petroleum made it the highest
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of energy
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from all over the timeframe. Regarding
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the graph, the
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of
peroleum
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petroleum
rose significantly from around 95 to 140 energy
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first 5 years, before plummeting to 100
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at the end
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of the first decade.
In contrast
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, the figure for coal registered a downward orientation from 80
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to under 40
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in 1984,
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it rose slightly to around 55
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in 1991, which was 45
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lower than the leading fuel. Meanwhile, the
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of natural gas reserves remained unchanged in the first 10 years. For the remaining time frame, the
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of petroleum jumped to 140
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in the next 4 years and kept that data till the end of the period.
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, the figure for natural gas went up rapidly to approximately 100
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in 2000, which was 40
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less than the top manufacturing fuel.
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, the
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of coal surged to around 43
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the end of the timeframe, which was at the bottom of the list.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, units with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 7 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • production levels
  • fuel types
  • trend
  • fluctuating
  • dominant
  • period
  • rise
  • decline
  • context
  • spikes
  • drops
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