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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows how uranium is used in the production of nuclear power. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. The process of how uranium is used in the production of nuclear power Write your answer

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows how uranium is used in the production of nuclear power. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. The process of how uranium is used in the production of nuclear power Write your answer
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The diagram provided illustrates the cycle of nuclear power production via
uranium
.
Overall
 it can be seen that
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nuclear power production revolves around various major steps
such
 as
Uranium
 mining, conversion to U-235 pellets, electricity generation and many more.
Initially
,
Uranium
 is extracted from the earth in order to form an ore.
This
 ore is protected by a circular cover to produce U-235
fuel
 pellets which
therefore
 power a generator resulting in the production of electricity. Eventually, The lifetime of the produced
fuel
 is four years, afterwards, it becomes worn out and not applicable for
further
 usage.
However
, some of the spent
fuel
 can be recycled and re-used.
Nevertheless
, the unrecyclable spent
fuel
 is stored in a container and buried.
This
 cycle has been used for decades and led to
further
 discoveries , especially regarding the properties of the
Uranium
 element and its various uses.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "further".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words uranium, fuel with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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