The line graph shows the average number of weekly patients visiting four clinics of a hospital from 2010 to 2016.

The line graph shows the average number of weekly patients visiting four clinics of a hospital from 2010 to 2016.
The graph illustrates the changes in the average
number
of weekly individuals going to various four clinics of a hospital over a six-year period, with units being measured in the numbers.
Overall
, even though the
number
of people going to eye
control
was lower than that of birth
control
in 2010, the former overtook the latter in 2016.
However
, the indicator of people going to diabetic and dental controls increased. Moving to a more detailed analysis, the
number
of individuals going to birth and eye
control
stood at 250 and 120 respectively at the beginning of the period,
then
both of them rose to 270 and 150 respectively in the following two years. A dramatic rise was in the figure for people visiting the eye clinic, at 350,
while
that for birth
control
decreased before climbing to approximately 250
at the end
of the period. Regarding the
number
of patients going to diabetic and dental clinics,
although
the
number
of patients visiting diabetic clinics made up 100,
then
it fluctuated and grew to 120 by 2016.
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