The given line graph depicts the needs of enquiring that the Tourist Information Office received within six months starting from January 2011 in a city.

The given line graph depicts the needs of enquiring that the Tourist Information Office received within six

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starting from January 2011 in a city. It can be seen that the

number

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of

enquiries

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in person and by

phoning witness

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an increase

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that of letter or email platforms

undergo

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underwent

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decline

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a decline

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. People sent their

enquiries

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to the Information Office by calling account for the largest

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in

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the beginning of January with approximately 900

enquiries

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, the figure started to slightly drop in the next month and steadily

rise

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in the next four

months

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.

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, the need to enquire physically rose dramatically within a six-month period and reached the highest

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of 1900

enquiries

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in spite of the lowest starting place with merely 400 in January. Meanwhile, sending

letter

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letters

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or email

enquiries

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experienced a fall in six

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. It can be seen that the

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of people on

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platform had a slight decrease In the first three

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, from nearly 800 to 700

enquiries

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. The figure

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constantly fell and stayed stable at 300 in the

last

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two

months

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.