The given line graph depicts the needs of enquiring that the Tourist Information Office received within six months starting from January 2011 in a city.
The given line graph depicts the needs of enquiring that the Tourist Information Office received within six
months
starting from January 2011 in a city. It can be seen that the number
of enquiries
in person and by phoning witness
an increase Replace the word
phone witnessed
while
that of letter or email platforms undergo
Wrong verb form
underwent
decline
.
People sent their Correct article usage
a decline
enquiries
to the Information Office by calling account for the largest number
in
the beginning of January with approximately 900 Change the preposition
at
enquiries
, the figure started to slightly drop in the next month and steadily rise
in the next four Wrong verb form
rose
months
. Whereas
, the need to enquire physically rose dramatically within a six-month period and reached the highest number
of 1900 enquiries
in spite of the lowest starting place with merely 400 in January.
Meanwhile, sending letter
or email Fix the agreement mistake
letters
enquiries
experienced a fall in six months
. It can be seen that the number
of people on this
platform had a slight decrease In the first three months
, from nearly 800 to 700 enquiries
. The figure then
constantly fell and stayed stable at 300 in the last
two months
.Submitted by weezel on
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