The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.

The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.
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The given line charts give information on the consumption of fish, lamb, beef and
chicken
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in a European region over a period of
25-year
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25 years
from 1979 to 2004. It can be seen from the graph that the expenditure
of
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chicken
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increased significantly meanwhile fish, lamb and beef
had
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went
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downward. Looking at the chart more closely, we can see that the
consuming
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for
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of
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fish
had
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hit
the
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its
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lowest point about 20 grams between 1979 and 2004. In terms of lamb, at the beginning
in
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of
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the period declined sharply from 150 grams in 1979 to 60 units
for
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1999.
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there was a decrease slowly around 10 units. The number of beef
plummet
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with some fluctuations. Regarding the
chicken
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, the count
of
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apply
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sector rose quickly with 140 to 250 grams for 1979 and 2004 respectively.
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,
chicken
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upwards
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trend substantially.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words chicken with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • fish
  • meat
  • poultry
  • beef
  • lamb
  • trend
  • increase
  • decrease
  • gradual
  • significant
  • fluctuate
  • peak
  • trough
  • steady
  • correlation
  • period
  • data
  • comparison
  • predominant
  • kilograms per capita
  • dietary habits
  • health consciousness
  • sustainability
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