The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.
The given line charts give information on the consumption of fish, lamb, beef and
chicken
in a European region over a period of 25-year
from 1979 to 2004.
It can be seen from the graph that the expenditure Correct your spelling
25 years
of
Change preposition
on
chicken
increased significantly meanwhile fish, lamb and beef had
downward.
Looking at the chart more closely, we can see that the Verb problem
went
consuming
Replace the word
consumption
for
fish Change preposition
of
had
hit Unnecessary verb
apply
the
lowest point about 20 grams between 1979 and 2004. In terms of lamb, at the beginning Change the word
its
in
the period declined sharply from 150 grams in 1979 to 60 units Change preposition
of
for
1999. Change preposition
in
Then
there was a decrease slowly around 10 units. The number of beef plummet
with some fluctuations.
Regarding the Wrong verb form
plummeted
chicken
, the count of
sector rose quickly with 140 to 250 grams for 1979 and 2004 respectively. Change preposition
apply
Overall
, chicken
upwards
trend substantially.Replace the word
upward
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