You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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These charts illustrate the changes
of
electrical devices' ownership and Change preposition
in
number
of hours doing housework in one country within Change the article
a number
the number
period
of Add an article
a period
the period
time
from 1920 to 2019.
Overall
, the amount of time
doing domestic work, like washing clothes, preparing meals, and cleaning, declined within period
of Add an article
a period
the period
time
, but the usage of refrigerator
and vacuum Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
cleaner
Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
is
likely Unnecessary verb
apply
tend
to increase from 1920 to 2000 and Wrong verb form
tended
got
steady Verb problem
remained
in
the end of Change the preposition
at
time
in 2019. On the other hand
, the washing machine line graph was decreased.
The amount of time
doing housework hit 50 hours per week in 1920 and plummeted significantly for the next two decades (1940-1960). After that, it went down slightly and reached 10 hours per week in 2019.
On the contrary
, in the beginning (1920), the percentage of households owning electrical appliances for washing machine
(40%) was higher than Fix the agreement mistake
machines
refrigerator
and vacuum Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
cleaner
. For three decades (1920-1960), Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
refrigerator
Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
has
a Wrong verb form
had
steeply
growth than the others, but Change the adverb
steep
then
both refrigerator
and vacuum Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
cleaner
showed a Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
slightly
increase and Change the adverb
slight
remain
steady (100%) Wrong verb form
remained
in
the end of Change the preposition
at
time
. Meanwhile
for washing Add a comma
Meanwhile,
Fix the agreement mistake
machines
machine
it went down in 1980 and Add a comma
machine,
then
climbed back and hit over 70% in 2019.Submitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words time, refrigerator with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "went down" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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