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The maps below show a town centre in 1990 and the same town centre today. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main future

The maps below show a town centre in 1990 and the same town centre today. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main future
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The pictures provide information about the transformation of the town
centers
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centres
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 in 1990 and 2024.
Overall
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. It showed significant changes in the town hall areas,
for instance
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, houses, pedestrian cross, and cafe.
In contrast
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, several
buildings
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 did not change
such
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 as
buildings
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 in the middle of the town, children's care, and 2 bank
buildings
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 in the east. In 1990, the city
centers
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 had stores for shopping and children’s care on the north side.
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, there were several houses on the south side and 2 bank
buildings
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 on the east side. The newest conditions of the city are renovated shopping malls, added 2 traffic lights, developed apartments, café and made pedestrians ways. There were several developments
such
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 as the building of 2 road crossings, replacing houses with apartment blocks, modifying the car road to a pedestrian area, replacing the bank with a café, and enhancing some shops to be shopping centres.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "such".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words buildings with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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