Some people say that schools should spend more money on computers, others say that more money should be spent on teachers' wages. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

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argument

that academic money should be spent more on

computers

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or the salaries of

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. I will discuss both perspectives and prove that the

teachers

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wages

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spending

is outweigh

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the electronic counterpart. Having

to

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said

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that academic places should invest more

on

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their modern facilities, especially with

computers

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to

enhence

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enhance

the

qualification

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of the students. The demand

of

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for

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using technologies

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study

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in schools

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to increase in the context of global

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modernization

. Scholars

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to access

with

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online documents and web surfing which may help them with their digital literacies.

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like

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, Sweden

promote

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teenage students to apply

computers

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on

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education

instead

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of

tradictional

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traditional

books.

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, using virtual environments for teaching make education more engaging and interactive.

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, through providing

lecture

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lively, scholars are expected to learn more effectively.

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, those advocating for higher teacher

wages

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believe that educators play a pivotal role in shaping students’ lives rather than devices. Like any

jobs

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over the world,

teachers

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also

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need to be well-paid to work productively with their

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.

Futhermore

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Furthermore

, there are

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of

household

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, nowadays,

could

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have a set of

computers

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so that we could save that money for

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teachers

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teachers'

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wages

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now. The prime example is

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of

build

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good computer rooms, Asian schools paid their budgets

for

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persuade and recruit famous

teachers

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. In conclusion, schools should allocate funds judiciously, recognizing the value of

teachers

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'

wages

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. A harmonious blend of technology and human expertise will lead to better educational outcomes.