The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014.

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014.
The line graph illustrates the average shifts in the
price
ratios of three separate metals which incorporating Copper,
Nickel
and
Zinc
in the twelve
months
of 2014
Overall
, there was a consistent downward trend observed in metal prices throughout the period. It can
also
be noted how
Zinc
experienced a moderate increase. In January 2014,
Nickel
reached its highest point at 6%, but
then
quickly dropped to 1% by March.
Following
this
, from April to November,
Nickel
experienced notable
price
fluctuations before settling at 1%.
On the contrary
,
Zinc
saw a rapid increase in its
price
during the first two
months
, followed by a 2% decrease in March. Like
Nickel
,
Zinc
also
underwent significant
price
swings from May to November, with a slight rise to 2% by December. Copper began at 2% in January and fluctuated over the initial seven
months
, maintaining stability at 1% for the subsequent three
months
. Towards the end of the year, there was a slight increase to nearly 2%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words price, nickel, zinc, months with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuations" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.

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  • average monthly change
  • prices of metals
  • trend
  • spike
  • fluctuation
  • increase
  • decrease
  • sharp rise
  • sharp fall
  • stability
  • volatility
  • data points
  • comparison
  • contrast
  • external factors
  • influences
  • market dynamics
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