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This line graph illustrates the number of tourists who visited Caribbean islands between 2010 and 2018, measured in millions

This line graph illustrates the number of tourists who visited Caribbean islands between 2010 and 2018, measured in millions
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The line graph provides information on how many tourists visited
Caribbean
Island
 from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
, the total number of
visitors
 steadily went up over time
while
 there were some fluctuations in the preference of accommodation chosen by the tourists. During the period from 2010 - 2015,
visitors
 to
Caribbean
Island
 preferred to stay on the
island
 rather than on cruise ships. The total number of
visitors
 staying on the
island
 was at its peak for 3 years in a row with 1.5
million
visitors
 from 2013 to 2015.
However
, from 2016 onwards, people seemed to change their preference to go on a cruise trip
while
 visiting the
Caribbean
 islands with the highest peak at 2
million
visitors
 in 2017.
On the other hand
, the total number of
visitors
 to
Caribbean
 islands gradually increased from 1
million
 people in 2010 to 3.5
million
 people in 2017.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words caribbean, island, visitors, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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