The diagram shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram shows how instant noodles are manufactured.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The illustration depicts a method of processing pasta. The 8-step cycle begins with workers conveying flour from storehouses to
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factory and ends with the production of noodles.
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is achieved by turning cooked tough into discs with vegetables and spices.
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, the process of packing dried pasta takes place. The process starts with the placement of flour into specialised bins, which
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mix the flour with water and oil. The obtained mass is spread on rollers and cut first into leaves,
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, and the noodles are pressed into dises. At step six, the discs are cooked with oil and dried, and the resulting sem-prepared noodles. Eventually, these are placed in disposable cups with the addition of spices. Stamps are glued to the packages and they are sealed.
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