The Table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. That starts so the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit during the same two periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table and the two pie charts illustrate the numbers of
visitors
and the results of their satisfaction respectively before and after the refurbishment
of the Ashadom Museum
.
Overall
, we can see that the number of visitors
during the year
after refurbishment
was higher than the number before refurbishment
. In addition
, we can see that most people who visited the museum
after refurbishment
were “Satisfied” and “very satisfied” rather than the visitors
the year
before refurbishment
who were mainly “Dissatisfied” and secondly
“satisfied”.
In the table, the number of visitors
from 74,000 before the museum
was refurbished increased to 92,000 after the museum
was refurbished. In the left pie chart which concerns the year
before refurbishment
, we see that the highest percentage was 40% of dissatisfied people while
the lowest percentage was 5% of “No response”. In the right pie chart, which concerns the year
after refurbishment
, we observe that the highest percentage was 40% of satisfied visitors
while
the lowest was 5% of both very satisfied visitors
and those who did not respond.Submitted by sssssraf on
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