The Table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. That starts so the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit during the same two periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table and the two pie charts illustrate the numbers of
visitors
and the results of their satisfaction respectively before and after the Use synonyms
refurbishment
of the Ashadom Use synonyms
Museum
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Overall
, we can see that the number of Linking Words
visitors
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year
after Use synonyms
refurbishment
was higher than the number before Use synonyms
refurbishment
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In addition
, we can see that most people who visited the Linking Words
museum
after Use synonyms
refurbishment
were “Satisfied” and “very satisfied” rather than the Use synonyms
visitors
the Use synonyms
year
before Use synonyms
refurbishment
who were mainly “Dissatisfied” and Use synonyms
secondly
“satisfied”.
In the table, the number of Linking Words
visitors
from 74,000 before the Use synonyms
museum
was refurbished increased to 92,000 after the Use synonyms
museum
was refurbished. In the left pie chart which concerns the Use synonyms
year
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refurbishment
, we see that the highest percentage was 40% of dissatisfied people Use synonyms
while
the lowest percentage was 5% of “No response”. In the right pie chart, which concerns the Linking Words
year
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refurbishment
, we observe that the highest percentage was 40% of satisfied Use synonyms
visitors
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while
the lowest was 5% of both very satisfied Linking Words
visitors
and those who did not respond.Use synonyms
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