The table below shows the income and jobs generated last year by tourism in Canadian states and territories.

The table below shows the income and jobs generated last year by tourism in Canadian states and territories.
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The table provides information about how tourism influenced jobs and salaries
last
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year in terms of millions and in the Canadian realm.
Overall
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, it can be observed that the area of Pacific Asia contributed the most to local earnings,
while
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the continent of Africa made the lowest proportion of employment and income.
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with, in terms of the biggest impact on the Canadian economy, Southeast Asia and Oceania accounted for 184.3
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, and 9.8% for earned money. The second most influential at-work part of the world is Europe and North America, about 9.9% and 11.3% respectively, and both reached approximately 9% of total salaries.
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, Africa composed only 7% of the profit, and 5,6% impacted Canadian states, which is 25.1
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.
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, Latin America and the Middle East had a similar pattern, with nearly 8.2% and 8.4% of the tourism contribution to the economy and 17,1 and 7.5
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vocations. What stands out in the table is that the Caribbean experienced the highest percentage of the revenue, about 13.7%,
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, only 2.8
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employments were generated
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tourism.
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