The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport. You should write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.

You should write at least 150 words.
The line chart provides key information about the amounts of commodities carried by various means of
transport
from 1974 to 2002, in the UK, with units measured in tonnes.
Overall
, it can be seen that the highest quantities of goods were transported by road over the given period.
In addition
, the transported amounts by
water
and
rail
were equivalent at the beginning the,
whereas
finally
, the transported quantities by
water
exceeded than the
rail
.
To begin
with, in 1974,
transport
by road started, at about 70 and rose gradually until reached about 90, in 2002, it experienced a slight decline from 1977 to 1987.
In addition
, In 1975, 40 was the same quantity, which was carried by
water
and
rail
and remained steady until around 1977,
then
the transfer by
water
increased to stand at about 60,
while
the
rail
transport
dropped and witnessed fluctuation to end, at about 40, in 2002. In terms of Pipeline
transport
, in 1974, the lowest amount was carried by it, at approximately 5, and rose gradually to more than 20 from 1983 to 1993, By the end of the period became consistent, at 20.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in addition".
Vocabulary: Replace the words transport, water, rail with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amounts" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Transported goods
  • Quantities
  • Trends
  • Modes of transport
  • Rail
  • Road
  • Water
  • Pipeline
  • Fluctuations
  • Predominance
  • Economic influences
  • Societal changes
  • Technological advancements
  • Environmental impact
  • Growth
  • Steady increase/decrease
  • Comparison
  • Period (e.g., decade, years)
  • Examination
  • Implications
  • Analysis
  • Conclusion
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